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Story : “A Dream of Fishes” Part IV

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


Chapter Two

From the open doorway of her tent positioned high on the hill, Ophetta watched the battle playing out in the marshlands below. Tendrils of dark smoke drifted up from the scene, rising to meet the carrion birds circling overhead. She counted at least two dozen dead or wounded sprawled in the mud, most of them enemy. It sickened her to see how they ignored their fallen comrades. No wonder they were losing.

Three days of carnage and the Belydonian generals still continued to throw their fighters at Kausidor like dandelion seeds to the wind. There was no strategy to it, never had been, with obvious results. The well honed defenses had easily repelled the invasion of Kausidor’s eastern border, shredding the offensive with the efficiency of a butcher’s carving knife. The pointless loss of life curtled Ophetta’s stomach.

“Ma’am, we are ready.”

Ophetta turned to the young girl who’d beckoned for her. Her apron smeared with blood and dirt, the nurse pointed towards the soldier now sitting up on the operating table, a fresh bandage over much of his upper right arm. Ophetta approached the man and examined the wound’s covering.

She cupped her left hand over the outside of his wounded arm and reached up under the soldier’s chin with her right to gently turn his face towards her. She looked into his eyes for a moment. He stared back, and Ophetta thought she saw a hint of fear there. He was much too young to be here. War destroyed the youth in a man, she thought.

“Your wound will mend in a few days,” she said softly to him. “Your king thanks you for the defense of our homeland.”

Ophetta concentrated her healing aura with true compassion and a diffuse green energy penetrated from her hand into the man’s arm. She could feel the tissue below responding, pulling together and closing the gash that had nearly severed the muscle completely. Yes, this man would regain use of his arm in short order.

“Tell your sergeant you are to return to the barracks, by order of Chief Surgeon Ophetta. Your battle is over, at least for today.” She stepped back from him and smiled to see the fear had fairly drained away from his face.

“Thank you, Miss Ophetta,” he said.

She nodded and turned back to her post overlooking the battle as the nurses helped the soldier to his feet and out the back of the tent.

Ophetta saw the remains of yet another Belydonian charge crumble in the boggy marsh, men dropping like anchors. The last infantryman, realizing he was now alone, turned in retreat. He’d only gone a few steps before he was cut down by archers from his own side, the arrows appearing from out of the mist hanging on the far edge of the wetlands. Better to surrender than retreat when a servant of Belydon, but he’d learned that lesson too late. She winced with the cruelty of it.

From her vantage she could easily see the Kausidorian battle lines. Infantrymen and archers settled behind defensive ramparts built up on mud and stone berms. Sharpened wooden shafts pointed outward towards the enemy to prevent any attempts at a cavalry charge. Not that the Belydonian horsemen could rush across the marsh if they wanted to. The muck sucked horses’ hooves downward with sickening speed, all but eliminating their effectiveness on this front.

Kausidor’s riders, on the other hand, had no such limitations, mounted on the great striding spooners. Large, flightless birds, spooners were ideally suited for this environment. Their long legs easily negotiated the boggy terrain. Large, flat bills, from which they derrived their names, were twice the length of a man’s arm and could be turned to great violence in the heat of battle. Without the great beasts the kingdom might surely have fallen many wars ago, a fact that had made the Kausidorian marsh cavalry legendary among her neighbors.

Ophetta saw them gathering now on the northern edge of the defensive fortifications. For three days, Kausidor’s generals had been happy to let the Belydonians flail against their defenses, but it appeared now that they were preparing to go on the offensive. Several units were mounted in groups of twenty, battle standards hanging limp before them in the misty air. Squires and stable hands were bustling about, tightening cinches, adjusting armor and helping to make final preparations. This would be the crushing blow that would surely drive the Belydonians back into their own territory for yet another season.

Just as assuredly it meant Ophetta and her healers would have more wounds to mend, more souls to sooth, and more bodies to send home for burial. She settled into a nearby chair and closed her strained eyes.

Far below in the marsh, a single trumpet sounded the cavalry’s departure.

General Algernon Stennis leaned forward in the saddle, his hands loose on the reins. His spooner needed no further instruction and it strode forward into the fen. The dark violet plumage on the back of the bird’s head bounced steadily with the pace of the creature’s footing.

The strategy was simple. A primary Kausidorian contingent would assault the Belydonians head on, while he circled to the north to strike at the command camp, a third cavalry group flanking south to cut off any attempt to retreat across the river. The heavy mists which had clung to the wetlands for weeks prevented his scouts from getting an accurate census of enemy forces, but Stennis was confident his riders could smash any resistance they encountered.

His adjutant, Lieutenant Kettering, pulled up alongside him, his roan spooner tossing its head in agitation.

“Get that beast under control, Lieutenant,” Stennis barked. “Are you a cavalryman or a carnival clown?”

“Sorry, sir,” Kettering apologized. “Sir, we have a problem.”

The general raised an eyebrow. “Well spit it out, Lieutenant! Don’t make me ask for it!”

“It’s the Battle-Mage, sir. He’s missing.”

Gods-be-damned mages. He hated them.

“Missing? And how is that, Lieutenant? He was mustered with the unit not half an hour ago, and I gave you strict orders to keep an eye on him personally.” Stennis spat angrily.

Lieutenant Kettering blanched. “I know you did, sir. I only left him alone for a few minutes, just long enough to double-check provisions with the supply sergeant and he was gone, sir.” The junior officer hung his head, obviously as much or more disappointed in himself than the general was.

Emmeritus The Hermit, as the locals called him, had been a thorn in his side from the moment he’d been assigned to Stennis’ unit. Apparently, he’d not come to defend his countrymen voluntarily and was quite vocal about his desire to be elsewhere. Twice yesterday alone, Algernon had threatened him with imprisonment should the coward decide to abandon his post, but apparently that had not been enough motivation to keep the wizard in line.

Stennis reconsidered the assaut plan in his head. Without a Battle-Mage they’d be without protections from the Belydonian mountain witches. Their curses tended to be weaker than other foes, but magic was never something to be triffled with.

“Okay, Lieutenant, pass the word among the troops. When we engage the enemy I want every man focused on finding and taking out their witches first. And if that traitor Emmeritus shows up, there’s a promotion in it for the the man that brings him to me in chains, do you understand me?”

“Quite clearly, sir!” Kettering threw up a salute and turned his mount back the other direction.

Story : “A Dream of Fishes” Part III

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


He knew he was dreaming now, and with that realization the scene around him gained clarity, losing the ethereal dreamlike quality and taking on a life-like state. He could see other kinds of fish; swimmers with dazzling colors, small schools drifting in and among the stones and coral, larger predatory hunters lurking darkly just outside the courtyard walls, waiting for the opportunity to quell their hunger, but somehow prevented from entering this place.

Off to his left were the remnants of a guard tower, the doorway collapsed and buried in rubble. To his right, an iron blacksmith’s anvil lay on it’s side, half burried in sand, coppery rust collecting on it’s surface. Opposite the courtyard, he saw the doorway into the palace proper. This had been someplace once. Someplace where people had carried out their lives, never knowing the fate that would one day leave it abandoned and lost to the ocean depths. Baylen shivered at the thought. Would they all come to this one day, crumbled stone and rust?

A faint sound jerked him from his revere. There was Tilly’s voice again, calling laughingly from somewhere deeper within the ruins. He couldn’t quite make out what she was saying. What was Tilly doing here, and what was with the unreal fish? Might as well follow the dream and find out, he decided.

Baylen pushed onward through the palace doorway into a grand hall. Here, the roof remained relatively intact and he could see once ornate chandeliers dangling from the ceiling. The remnants of an occasional picture frame or decorative ornament lay scattered across the floor, but paintings, carpets and tapestries had long since rotted away. Again, the strange glow from luminescent coral clumped here and there bathed the place in soft rainbow light.

“Baylen,” the whispery voice called from the far end of the hall. Instead of Tilly, however, he spied the golden ilmet floating just inside the door, staring at him intently.

“Baylen, come to me,” it mouthed.

“Tilly?” He moved closer and the fish made no attempt to dart away this time. “What’s going on?”

A twinge of fear grasp Baylen’s insides. Dream or no, he couldn’t help but feel as if he were losing control of his own will, compelled as he was to obey the fish. Almost without knowing it he’d closed the distance in half and could see it lucidly for the first time. It’s scales appeared like handcrafted gold, each with a different, unknown symbol inscribed into the surface. It’s dorsal fin spread along it’s back like a delicate fan, translucent between the spiny bones that held it erect. And the eyes. Those were not a fish’s eyes. They were bright and focussed, the iris shades of emerald green interwoven with striations of gold, flecked with crystals of orange.

He knew those eyes from many nights of dreaming. They were Tilly’s eyes, peering directly into his own.

Then, just as he came close enough to touch the creature, it darted back into the recesses of the next room and vanished from sight. Baylen called out in surprise, and realized that the sudden panic he felt was driven not by fear, but by the yearning to hold the being, to touch it, to possess it. The feeling of those eyes, so knowingly looking directly into his heart, was so overpowering that the desire to recover his connection with them filled his mind.

He plunged headlong into the room where it had gone. Where she had gone.

And stopped.

The room before him was gleaming. Every corner, every alcove, was filled with radiant piles of treasure. Gold coins and bars, gemstones the size of his fist, and dangling chains of platinum littered the floor. There were ornate lamps, vases, and candelabras stacked atop one another. The entire room was a trove that surely would make even the Kausidorian kings envious.

Baylen’s heart pumped furiously as he took it all in. With only a handful of these valuables his family’s troubles would be over. He imagined the worry lines fading from his mother’s face, his uncle’s creased brow relaxing. He would save them. Eyeing a pile of gold coins near his feet, he stretched out his hand to begin filling his pockets.

The gold vanished. The room evaporated. Darkness rushed in to replace the garrish light and he saw almost nothing. Baylen’s lungs seared with pain as if he’d held his breath for days, threatening to explode at any moment. He felt his own heartbeat pounding a beat of terror in his ears. Worst was the immediate knowledge that he was not alone. The hunters, no longer held in check by the magical residence were circling, closing in around him. Certainly they would strike at any moment.

All thoughts of the Tilly-fish were gone. Hysteria was taking over. Which way was up? It was so dark he couldn’t be sure. The water was cold enough his joints ached and muscles became sluggish. He pushed frantically towards the surface, desparate to escape the sea’s numbing grip. Each stroke upwards was more difficult than the last.

Baylen thought of his father. Is this how he’d died? Drowning, desperate for one single breath of air? What would Amalea do if he died here? He struggled harder and began to make out dim light above penetrating the darkness. He could do this, he could escape, he thought. He had to.

But the boy’s lungs could hold out not more and refused to obey, the fierce need for oxygen took over any voluntary control and they released his dying breath into the current. Saltwater rushed in to meet his gasp and Baylen thrashed uncontrollably. His body was no longer his own. His bowels released in the final throws of death.

The last thing he saw were the dark shapes rushing up from below to claim their prize.

Story : “A Dream of Fishes” Part II

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


Chapter 1 (continued)

Baylen looked to his mother for explaination, but she only shrugged. “He was a strange one alright, but what do I care? If he wants raw fish that’s that much less work we have to do for more money.”

Baylen watched as she emptied the tote into one of the nearby barrels of seawater and disappeared inside, leaving the men alone.

“She’s a might worked up today,” remarked Dagmire.

“I noticed that. I think she worries too much, Uncle. We aren’t that bad off are we?” It was a question in hopes of an answer different from the one he knew he would receive. Uncle Dagmire was showing the uncharacteristic signs of worry as well, his forehead was furrowed and eyes less bright than their normal green.

There was a long delay filled with much puffing on the pipe and picking at fingernails. Dagmire looked up the hill towards the Millenium Tree, now small in the distance and sillohetted by the near dark of twilight. A few small stars were beginning to become visible high above it’s branches.

“You’re like a son to me, Baylen, you know that, so I won’t lie to you. Prospects aren’t so good. We’re running out of the very things we need to make a living and without the money to buy more we’re likely to be sitting here completely empty come fall. We’ve got one small bucket of salt left, barely enough wheat grain for a few loaves of bread, I’m almost out of twine for repairing the nets, and summer taxes are nearly come due.

“No, Baylen, things are worse than I think we’ve let you know before now.” Uncle Dagmire never stopped looking of to the West while he spoke, as if intentionally avoiding Baylen’s gaze in order to be able to speak with such candor.

Baylen just sat and listened, thinking heavily on his uncle’s words. If things had truly gotten this bad he would have to try something different and dangerous.

“Thank you for being honest with me,” he said, slowly rising from his seat. “I have one more request for you, Uncle. Can you prepare me a long rope, one at least 400 hands long, and four shorter length, say twelve hands in length? I’ll need them tomorrow if you can.”

Dagmire tugged at his silver white beard and cast a suspicious look at Baylen. “What is it you have in mind, son?”

“A solution,” the young man said with resolve, and with that pushed the door open and disappeared inside.

Evenings around the home were typically short and sunrise came early, so Baylen had little time to discuss his ideas with Amalea and Dagmire, nor did he have the inclination to do so. If things were truly as dire as his uncle described, he didn’t have much choice and would not worry his family over his safety.

After a short meal he was in bed, going over the plan in his mind. He’d heard that merchants from the capital were paying well for pearls harvested from these waters. Something about the area differed from other regions, giving the pearls here a rare, violet shade. He’d also heard the stories of more than a few desperate young men drowning while attempting to acquire the milky gems. Still, if he could only find two or three of the opaline spheres they would be saved. He could easily sell them for enough gold to pay the summer’s-end taxes and still have more than enough to carry the family through the winter into the next fishing season. Maybe things would be better by then.

Baylen’s mind drifted in and out of consciousness, and with it his thoughts also turned to the girl Tilly. She had smooth, pale skin, flaming red hair, and emerald eyes that sparkled like crystals. In his mind’s eye he dreamed of her smiling face, dimples turned up at the corners of her mouth, making her all the more beautiful. Her voice was surreal, like birds welcoming a new spring day.

He’d had this dream of her many nights before, and much of his daydreaming on the boat was spent reenacting different interactions with her. But something was different tonight. Her hair slowly drifted up and away from her face in waves, as if she were submerged. Baylen caught a glimpse of something gold darting away just out of sight behind Tilly’s floating vision, and she began to fade.

He was defintely underwater now, deep enough that the sun’s rays were barely visible high above, penetrating the cool blue waters with turqois shafts. The dark shapes of coral reefs surrounded him. Again, a brilliant golden blur disappeared just outside of clear vision, engulfed by the shadows of the reef. What was it? Whatever it was he seemed strangely drawn to it.

Seeing no reason not to, Baylen swam after it, hoping to resolve the curious mystery. He was holding his breath, but couldn’t feel any pressure in his chest and there didn’t appear to be any need to panic over air yet. As he came round the patch of coral he saw it more clearly. A small, brilliantly gold colored fish, darting in and out of the shoals further towards the open ocean and heading deeper still. But for the coloring, it looked all the world like an ilmet, the very fish his livelihood depended on and was dying because of.

He swam harder, straining against the water to catch up with the little fish. He crossed a threshold that marked the beginning of deep water below him and watched it disappear yet again, this time into what looked to be some kind of ruins. Large, limestone blocks, encrusted with barnacles and overgrown with algea, lay crumbling in what was left of a once great fortress or palace. Baylen propelled himself deeper still, passing through the former entryway into gardens of bright living coral that cast ambient light across the white sands of the courtyard to replace the now vanished sun overhead.

Story : “A Dream of Fishes” Part I

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


Chapter One

Sunlight reflected magnificently off the surf boiling at the base of the cliff up onto its sheer white rock face. From his vantage point several hundred yards offshore young Baylen watched the early evening festival of light along the coastline, the gentle rocking of his small boat, the soft sounds of waves lapping against its wooden hull, and the sun’s warmth on his back making him wholly content.

He saw the towering old Millennium Tree, with its roots burrowed eternally into the highest shelf of the cliff, branches reaching out over the water, basking in the orange glow of the waning sun. That tree looked the same now as it had when his father was a boy drifting on these seas decades earlier. Just beyond the tree, down the opposite side of the cliff-top hill, lay the family’s hovel. For Baylen, as with his father and grandfather before him, the tree was a symbol of home, the love of which continually drove the men of their family away from its shores and out onto the open ocean.

The call of a nearby seabird nudged his focus away from his daydreams. Amalea, his mother, was leaning against the old tree with one hand, waving a red kerchief with the other to get his attention. He raised one of the boats oars in recognition and then, after raising his nets, began rowing toward the small boat dock nestled at the base of the cliff.

It was a short trip and in minutes he was hiking up the stone steps hewn into a massive crevasse, hauling along his rather weak catch in a canvas tote strung over his shoulder. The ilmet catch had grown consistently smaller over the last few seasons, which worried him a great deal. Their family had come to depend entirely on the little silvery fishes for their livelihood, and as their numbers declined, so did the folks’ prosperity.

The bounty of the sea was no longer reliable, causing fishermen all up and down the seaboard to abandon their former lives and seek their fortunes further inland. Some had become farmers, others plied various trades in the bustling cities of Kausidor, but regardless of where their new lives led them the end result was what appeared to be a slow and agonizing death for the vibrant culture of the kingdom’s coastal towns.

Baylen hardly remembered those more prosperous times. His father disappeared at sea when he was barely nine years old, and Uncle Dagmire lost an arm in the nets the following year, leaving Baylen the sole provider for the family these five years since. Amalea nearly moved into the city to work there in the bakeries several times, but neither Baylen nor Dagmire would budge. They were men of the sea and had no intentions of leaving, even if it meant they were the last family living on this part of the coast.

As he reached the top of the climb, Baylen turned for one last look out at the ocean. The sun’s edge now blended into an orange line marking the horizon, making it appear to melt like wax along the ocean’s surface.

“Thinking of your father?” Amalea spoke quietly from behind, trying not to startle him.

“Every day, mother,” he said, smiling as he turned to place an arm over her shoulder. “Do you ever think about what happened to him?”

She reached up to pat the hand resting on her shoulder. “There are days when I consider it, but to be honest, Baylen, thinking about it only makes me worry more each time you take that dingy out. The sea took your father from us. It stole your uncle’s arm, and I fear it will someday break what is left of my heart and carry you away from me as well.”

“The sea didn’t take Dagmire’s arm, mother. Carelessness with the nets did that.” The young man pulled his mother into a tighter hug. “As for me, I wish you wouldn’t worry so. Out there is where I’m comfortable. I can work an honest day’s labor with plenty of time to contemplate anything my mind takes fancy to. It’s a good life.”

Amalea bristled slightly and stepped back, point an accusing finger at the tote Baylen carried. “A good life? Look at yourself, Baylen. You’re wet, tired, and stink of sea salt and fish. What have you got to show for it? Barely enough to bother preparing, much less making a trip into town to sell.

“Look, I know how much you love doing what you father did and what that means to you, but don’t you want more from life than a struggle just to make ends meet? You speak of contemplation; well then tell me, son, what is it you think on that makes you satisfied with fish guts and broken nets?” At this, Baylen blushed slightly and avoided looking her in the eyes, a grin teasing the corners of his mouth.

“I think of lots of things, Mom. It doesn’t have to be anything certain. I just like to ponder things in general.” It was a lame answer and he knew it, but he hoped it would be enough to convince her to shift the tide of the conversation. Of course, it wasn’t.

Amalea smiled, her mood softened and she jabbed playfully at Baylen’s ribs. “Ah, it’s that girl, isn’t it? What’s her name again?”

“Tilly,’ the boy embarassingly responded.

“I’m sorry, Baylen, forgive your mother for an old woman’s worries. Sometimes I forget your age. You have plenty of time to come up with worries of your own and I shouldn’t scold you so. So when do I get to finally meet this Tilly? Tell me more about the girl that keeps my son’s head swimming in daydreams!”

With this she took the fish tote from Baylen and turned to start walking down the hill, away from the Millenium Tree and the ocean it overlooked. Baylen fell in beside her and the two continued their talk on the way to the small house nestled in the edge of the woods at the base of the hill.

“There’s not a lot to tell, Mother. I’ve only talked to her a couple times. She works at the tavern in town.”

“The tavern, eh? And what were you doing there?”

Baylen’s grin split his face and he couldn’t help but chuckle. “Now remember what you said about ‘old woman’s worries’, Mom. I swear I only go in there to talk with the other fishermen and compare catches, that sort of thing.”

“And to see Tilly,” Amalea said.

“Well, there is that,” Baylen raised an eyebrow slyly and winked at her.

As they neared the house, Baylen saw Uncle Dagmire sitting on the porch, deftly working a needle and sinew repairing nets with his one remaining hand. A large, curled pipe dangled from his lips. Dagmire spent his days working diligently from his workshop here on the stoop, doing anything to support Baylen’s fishing efforts or Amalea with the house chores. He was surrounded by the tools of his trade, a variety of hooks gauged into the porch’s vertical supports while nets of all shapes and sizes draped over the railings. Dagmire dropped the mending, grabbed at his pipe and waved hearitly, weaving a cloud of blue smoke over his head.

Baylen ran the remaining distance and up the steps to give the old man a hug. He lifted the net from Dagmire’s lap and inspected his uncle’s craftsmanship.

“I don’t know how you do it, Uncle. You still make the best nets in Kausidor!”

Dagmire guffawed, “Bah, Baylen, if you weren’t such a good fisherman I’d say you should be a politician, doling out such a load of dung like it was so much sugar! How was the catch?”

Baylen grimaced. “It’s near worse every day, Uncle. I barely filled a single tote today.”

The old mad drew heavily on the pipe and exhaled slowly. “At least it’s as good as twice that many now.”

Baylen looked confused. “What do you mean?”

“Didn’t you tell him?” Uncle Dagmire looked to Amalea.

“I was just getting to that,” she answered. “We had a visitor while you were out, Baylen. A new buyer from town came by with an offer. He’s willing to pay almost twice the going rate for any ilmet you catch.”

Baylen puzzled over this for a minute. Despite the apparent good fortune of such a proposition something didn’t seem quite right. “What about the other fish? There aren’t that many ilmet around anymore.”

Dagmire shook his head. “Dangdest thing, that. He isn’t interested in any other fish, only ilmet. On top of that he doesn’t want them scaled, salted, dried, pickled or prepared in any other way. He was an odd fellow, but appeared quite determined to get his hands on as much as we can sell him.”

Prop: Shade

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


Drug created through a combination of both magical and alchemical processes. The primary base powder which is later enchanted is made of powdered ilmet scales.

Unlike some drugs that make you lethargic, or those that amp you up, shade has visual halucinogenic properties. Specifically, it causes eyes to translate anything that is in motion relative to the user to appear to have a variety of colored auras surrounding it while anything that is not moving appears normal. The faster the rate of movement the more defined the aural effect.

As a result, users of shade tend to like to watch sporting events, attend dances, go spooner riding in Gooseneck Marsh, etc. One thing they do not like is to do anything near large standing bodies of water. The way waves reflect and cast light causes a shade user to enter an almost catatonic trance-like state if seen in large swaths of the visual field of view.

Although shade users are in complete control of their faculties they can easily be identified by the “spaced out” look in their eyes and the visual effects often cause them to be easily distracted. As a result, it has become fashionable within the kingdom for women in particular to wear darkly colored thin veils. This serves to hide their eyes and also to lessen the effect when needed. This, in turn, has led to these veiled women and shade users in general to be referred to as “shaders”. As trends go, however, even women who do not use shade find it easier to fit with the “in crowd” by wearing the shader veil.

Prop: Rite of Ages

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


The Rite of Ages is an ancient ritual that is the foundation for the creation of The Council of Ages, which in turn, is the defining element of what makes this story’s kingdom unique. Unlike most nations, whose history belongs to books and scholars and may be revised over time, this land’s history is alive and present within the daily activities of the royal court. The ritual itself is a complex piece of mysticism that involves strict adherence to both magical and alchemical practices.

The Rite of Ages consists of the following steps:

• An individual is selected for inclusion into the Council of Ages prior to their death. This is important as it is too late to recognize someone in this way after they are already dead.
• A small sample of their blood is the placed in a vial made of the special alchemical alloy. The blood is then enchanted so as to be a viable container for the person’s soul. This alloy is the only known substance that can touch the soul-steeped blood without corrupting it. The vial is made into a blood amulet, which the person then wears around their neck always.
• In the event of their death, their soul is attracted to the blood amulet and captured there temporarily, but it can only remain there until midnight on the night of their death. If the ritual is not completed before then the soul is the summoned ot judgement by the god or gods (no specific religious aspect of this culture are yet developed).
• The body and the amulet are then normally taken to a special chamber within the palace to have the Rite performed. While it is possible to conduct the Rite of Ages at any location, it is highly unorthodox and rarely done except in the most extreme of cases.
• The body is laid out on a stone table, normally in fine clothing or with items that will make the soul feel more comfortable set out upon the table as well.
• A mage of the royal court uses an emboldening rod to draw magical runes

TODO List for this entry:

• Write a descriptive historical scene that explains how the process was discovered and by whom
• Name the special alchemical alloy that items used in this ritual are made of delete

Prop: emboldening rod

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


These rods are tapered in shape, the thick end about the diameter of a hand tool such as a hammer. They are roughly 18 inches long, with the tapered end only having the diameter of a ball-point pen. They are constructed from a bronze-like metal alloy created through yet another secret alchemical process.

Emboldening rods are used to apply the blood from a blood amulet to the face of a recently deceased person during the Rite of Ages. The blood, being the temporary container for that person’s soul, can only be touched by something constructed of this alloy or the soul will become corrupt.

Prop: blood amulet

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


Amulets given to persons of prominence within the society. This marks them as an individual whose personality will be preserved eternally as a member of The Council of Ages. The amulet contains a small vial of the person’s blood that has been enchanted by royal court magicians, thus allowing the blood to act as a temporary container for the person’s soul after death.

The blood from the amulet must then be applied using special emboldening rods during the Rite of Ages, a ritual which must be performed before midnight on the day of the person’s death. The head is severed from the dead body during the Rite, and it becomes the permanent container for the soul.

Thus The Council of Ages is a collective group of body-less immortals who represent the entirety of the kingdom’s history and rule.

Prop: illmet

by Pappy April 29th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


Small silvery fish whose numbers have dwindled significantly because they are being over fished.

Their scales are powdered and used as one of the many ingrediants of the magical/alchemical drug known as “shade”

Importance of Scene: In and Out of Story

by Pappy April 20th, 2007, Posted in: Writing


I originally wrote the following article for Worldbuiler Wiki. It is intented to reference the specific needs of collaborative writing projects.

Scenes might be events, actions, or relative inner thoughts of characters. But in collaborative fiction, where several authors may be working on intertwined stories, scenes are more than that. In this environment, a scene becomes a shared past or important element of the story-world’s culture.

Even beginning authors know that in order for characters and places to feel real to the reader, the author must be in touch with them as if they were. But this can be more difficult when two or more authors are writing about that character. By having a shared understanding of that character’s past they can begin to understand that character in the same way.

Within the Worldbuilder Wiki, we address this by creating scenes that may never appear in any finished story. Scenes about important events in the characters’ past, or interactions with certain people that represent those characters’ relationships.

Take, for example, the following small scene from the Commonwealth world:

Jumeah doesn’t trust Kyber (See Kyber-Jesiree Plot ) and throws a fit every time he comes into the bar with Jesiree. Kyber takes great joy in reminding Jumeah about Commonwealth Law in regards to the equal treatment of all sentient beings.

Scene


“You don’t even belong to any real race!” Jumeah protested.

Kyber placed his front paws on the counter-top, leaning forward to look the proprietor squarely in the eyes. “It is true; I am unique among the races, but I assure you, drinkmaster, I am real.” With the emphasis on “real” he flexed his considerable feline claws. The gouges left behind in the hardwood bar were indeed a testiment to the reality of their lethal ability.

Jumeah’s protest registered as tiny sparks of silver and yellow flashing from the outer corners of his eyes out to the violet tips of his tenticles. “Freak!” he spat and turned to distract himself with more desirable customers.


As this scene shows, there are distinct elements of both characters’ personalities on display quite clearly. It may be appropriate to actually insert this scene into one of the Commonwealth stories at some point, but then again it may not. Regardless, having this information while authoring interaction between these charcters could be vital to uinderstanding this relationship in other stories.This can be of equal importance when it comes to cultural aspects of your world that play important roles. In speculative fiction, where entire universes exist at the authors’ disgression, you have to make the world’s uniqueness palpable to the reader or they will never become invested in the world you strive to create. Would the Vulcan mind-meld mean anything to a Trekkie if the Star Trek franchise had not invested so much time and energy into the background of that cultural practice? George Lucas might never have seen Star Wars achieve its amazing popularity if the concepts of The Force, a cultural element that was the underpinning for much of the story plot, were muddled or unclear to viewers and readers alike.

In reference to the collaborative environment here at Worldbuilder Wiki, lets look at another example that could benefit from having a historical scene available to authors.

In the Council of Ages world, there is a magical process that allows a character’s personality to be preserved in their severed head long after their death. These heads are then given positions of prominence within The Council of Ages, an immortal group of advisors that support whomever the current royal ruler may be. It is a secret ritual that involves blood amulets and emboldening rods. Because of the nature and importance of this process it would be helpful to have a scene to clarify for all the authors of this world exactly how this works.

Although I don’t yet have this scene written, here is a rough set of expectations for what it should explain:

• Explanation of the blood amulet - amulets given to important members of society who have been “marked” for inclusion in the Council. They contain the blood of the wearer that has been enchanted.
• Explanation of the emboldening rods - rods carried by a select few mages thoughout the kingdom. When a person wearing a blood amulet dies, the emboldening rod must be used on the amulet and the body before midnight on the day of their death.
• Explaination of the Rite of Ages - the actual ritual whereby the rod is used on the amulet and the body and the head severed. Almost always takes place in the palace itself in the presence of the royal court.

Scene Outline:
• So to give this process life, our scene might begin with a battle in which the defenders are losing. Late in the evening the commander of the armies is brought into the command tent, gravely wounded and likely to die, his blood amulet around his neck.
• The head battle-mage is summoned, who arrives with his emboldening rod, ready to perform the Rite of Ages on location due to the late hour. The healers are trying to keep the commander alive until after midnight so his body can be taken to the palace, where the Rite of Ages is traditionally performed.
• The commander dies shortly after midnight and the battle-mage and a contingent of guards race to take the body to the palace. When they arrive they are ushered into a chamber reserved for the Rite. The king awaits there to bear witness to the event.
• The body is layed out in fine dress on a stone table. The mage takes the tapered end of the rod and dips it in the blood of the amulet, and uses it to draw runes on the cadaver’s face while chanting incantations. At the right final moment, the king places his hand on the rod on top of the mage’s and an accolyte severs the head in a single stroke.
• A few minutes go by while the headless body is removed to be buried, then the eyes of the severed head blink to life. The commander pleads forgiveness from the king for losing the battle. The king puts his guilt to rest and assures him he has earned his place on The Council of Ages.

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